Friday, 8 June 2018

Welcome to my blog


Hi my name is Rylee. I go to Makauri school. I am in year 6.  I like netball I play shooter . I look up to Maria Folau.I have 3 other siblings. I do Dance fit, and silks as well as netball and guitar. I go surfing when the waves are right. I've been overseas many times to places like Fiji , Vanuatu,  Samoa and Australia.

 My favorite subject is writing. I like to write. I'm pretty good at writing. I'm good at structure,sentences, vocabulary, and punctuation. My Goals for this year is trying to add betterwords in my writing. 

 

I also need to work on my Organisation, and my ideas.
This year I'm looking forward to maybe getting my new horse that dad has promised me. I really want to go to another Silver Ferns game but they're not doing very well this year.  I look up to Saffy Bette the surfer. I've actually had private lessons with her and it really fun. This year I'm trying to find a guitarist I look up to because then I could play songs of theirs. And as for netball, I have to work on slowing down because I run too fast.


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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous22 June 2018 at 10:57

    hey Rylee,
    That was a very good piece of writing. I thought you were very informative about your goals and strengths. what is one of your goals in writing?

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  3. Henry22 June 2018 at 11:04

    Woo,man! I didn't now much about you but then this! It makes me feel like a expert about you. but anyway Tapatapahi ana!

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  4. Anonymous30 July 2018 at 10:15

    Kia ora, I am Lily-rose from Matawai School.
    I loved the astonishing work you have done to your ship, our class has done the same thing as you.
    I am from samoa It is such a great place to go surfing.
    Such a coincidence I am going to start dance fit, and I am also getting a new horse and I love doing netball and surfing.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="http://matawailily-rosec.blogspot.com/”>here</a>

    Mā te wā
    Lily-rose

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    1. Anonymous10 August 2018 at 10:42

      kia ora Lilly-rose
      Thank you for your lovely comment
      In samoa I did go surfing it is so pretty there

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